- 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处
- 200分挑毛病english learning and history learningStart from primary school,in the grade of 5,I began to learn English.It was really a long time ago,until now,I still sink into English study since I chose English to be my major in university.While
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处
Thank you for sending to me the Schedule for Summer English Courses． 去掉As for me choice，I'd prefer a six-week c...
200分挑毛病english learning and history learningStart from primary school,in the grade of 5,I began to learn English.It was really a long time ago,until now,I still sink into English study since I chose English to be my major in university.While
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It was really a long time ago,（until now,）省略,因为没必要
I still sink into English study- I have been submerged in English learning
since I chose English to be my major-to be 改为as
in university.-at university
While for history,I learned -have learned
it as a professional subject just 3 years.
it really teaches a lot.-teaches us a lot
takes me to travel the world-allows ne to ...
that happen -happened
settle their problem -problems
what English cannot provide me.-me后加with
other civilization and customs that seems -seem
where I has been raised,-have been brought up
what I has been educated.--have been educated for
It especially and predominately riches -enriches
my knowledge,open my mind -opens
and the other culture,-and other cultures
principally the western culture.-,especially
while when learning history,-while或when去掉一个
we need to read more extra books that relate --that are related to history
to fulfill our further understandings.--to perfect...
既然是学英语的,我想就不用说明原因了,总之写的还不错啦
